Had you indicated exactly what suggestions need to change, I could have helped you do it myself. However, since I cannot see the text, I will not be capable of doing it myself. So I'd rather advise you a tool that you can use to find word replacements yourself and make the sentences that need to be changed more readable and entertaining without having to do it manually, because this tool automatically changes the texts with AI. I am talking about the paraphraser https://pr-cy.io/rewrite/.